22 December 2024

DIARY || a minor discourse || master in writing a DIARY

 D I A R Y   E N T R Y

It’s a kind of self-expression. It is used to write personal experiences usually in a separate book. Now-a-days many publishers are trying to make it different from one another. But there are some common features of the diary as day, date, salutation and signature. There mustn’t write the routine works in a diary. Writing the diary usually takes place in the evening before bed. A diary must be put in a box. It is written in first person.

Use some rough work separately. Make use of the hints given and write simple sentences. Connect them using linkers to make the sentences into a paragraph. Then add some layout to the paragraph. That’s it. You’ve done.

Common format for the diary:

Date                                                                                                                             

Day

Time (Optional)

HEADING (Optional)

Dear diary,

                                                                         Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary Body of the diary

                                                                                                                                                          Signature

Useful phrases or sentences:


I am really so happy today that ….

It was really amazing to observe …….

It’s actually cruel to behave like that ….

I am so sorry today for what I have done …

It’s really shocking to me that ……

I never believe that it would happen in my life ….

I am very thankful to ………….

It was the wonderful day in my life ….

It mustn’t happen again that ….

I never expected to be like this but the fate made me ….

E.g.:  On your birthday your parents made you surprise by gifting you a Carl Davison Motor Cycle from the US that you haven’t expected. Now make a diary entry on your birthday.

12th of March, 2022                                                                                                   

Thursday

My Parents’ Gift

My dear Diary,

            It’s really happened today. I am so happy for what I got today as a gift from my parents on my birthday. It is the Carl Davison Motor Cycle from the US. I asked my parent to buy a bike. But it is amazing to me that they provided the world’s famous one. I love my parents. It’s not for the bike but every bit of love that they shower on me. I think no parents are there on this beautiful earth like my parents. It might be my father’s choice.

I still cannot believe that it happened on my birthday. Thanks to dad and mom.

                                                                                                                                                       -Vishal

 E.g.: You are selected to act as a teacher on the self-government day in your school. Now make a diary entry of your own expressing your feelings.

 

13th November 2021                                                                                                 

Sunday

Dear Diary,

            Amazing!! There happened it today in my school. Though it’s Sunday we went to school for selections. For many years I have been waiting for an opportunity to enact as a teacher in the celebrations of Self Government Day, the auspicious Children’s day. Finally, I am selected as one of the teacher participants tomorrow to teach class 6 and the subject is my favorite English.  I prepared some teaching learning material to teach my juniors in my school with the help of my teacher of English. Thanks to my teachers for selecting me.

            It’s really pleasure for me to be a teacher, the pride of the nation. I hope I’ll be a successful teacher tomorrow and wish to get the first prize as well.

                                                                                                                                                    - Swagath

E.g.: While you are going to school an old woman was hit and run by a reckless bike rider. Now make a diary entry on the incident happened in the morning.

3rd July 2021                                                                                                                             

Monday

Dear Diary,

               It’s really unforgettable thing that happened today in the morning, while I was returning home from school.  I saw an old woman who was trying to cross the road at the traffic signals. As she was too old she was unable to cross the road as fast as others do. While she was crossing the road, it happened. A drunken idiot knocked her out and went away. The old woman screamed. I was terrified with that and went there to help her.

               Luckily, she was safe but injured a little at her ankle. The traffic police officer said that it was recorded by the CC cameras at the junction and he will be caught and punished for his reckless riding.

               Thank God. She is safe any way.

                                                                                                                                                            -Srujana

E.g.: You have completed your Summative Examinations successfully today. Now make a diary entry of your feelings on the completion of the examinations.

30th April, 2022                                                                                                          

Thursday

Dear Diary,

            Today I am so happy because I have successfully completed my SSC Examinations. At the same time, I felt a bit nervous as I miss my friends now onwards. The school life ends today. I have some kinds of emotions for all our future. How it would be? Whether my friends follow me in the next years or they choose anything different to me. I have been with these friends since I was in class 2.

            When I joined the school Rachana comforted me with her nice friendship. I never forget the beauty and this greenery of the school and the teachers, who always lend their helping hand to the children.

            Still I have not believed that my school life has been completed. I love to continue my friendship with all after the school and I remember till the end of my life.

                                                                                                                                                 -Srujana

E.g.: In the lesson ‘Attitude is Altitude’ Nick Vujicic got his photograph on Surfer magazine after his 3600 feat. Now imagine yourself as Nick and make a diary entry of your feelings on that day.

12th May 2022                                                                                                                           

Friday

10.00 pm

Dear diary,

               I am very happy today, that I got my photograph on Surfer Magazine for my 3600feat on surfing board. It is all possible by the inspiration of my teacher Bethany Hamilton. She is also a disabled person, whose arm was bitten by a shark when she was 12. She taught me how to surf. I quickly learned how to do the 3600 spin on the board as I have low center of gravity. She appreciated me by remarking that no one has ever done that in the history of surfing.

               I am very thankful to my teacher and the management of the magazine for encouraging people like me.                                                                                           

                                                                                                                                 -Nick

E.g.: You knew that Nick Vujicic was inspired by a newspaper article about a disabled man. Now imagine yourself as Nick Vujicic and make a diary entry on the day you read the article.

18th August 2021                                                                                                                                     

Friday

9.20 pm

He Changed My Attitude

Dear diary,

               Today is a special day in my life. I am really very much pleased to know about a disabled man by reading a newspaper article. He achieved great things and helped others. He was really great. I was inspired by him.

               Until today I hated the God for making me a torso. But after reading the article I realized why God made us like this. I am greatly inspired by him and decided to encourage others.

               If I can encourage one then my job in this life is done.

                                                                                                                                    -Nick

E.g.: You have read the passage, ‘I will do it.’ Think that you were Mr. Narayana Murthy. Now make a diary entry on the day you have passed with high rank in IIT entrance results.

17th August 1972                                                                                                                                     

Thursday

9.20 pm

Dear diary,

               How would I express my feelings? It was very much elated in the morning when the results were announced and came to know that I got a high rank. And it is sure that I would get a seat in IIT for my performance. Then all my dreams were burnt to ashes when I met my father to tell him the results.

               Finally, I have understood the financial position of my poor father. How could he bear the burden of my expensive studies there outside our village? But I never quit. I would do something better for my future. I would join in a course in which my parents can bear my expenses and I study hard. I decided to do some part time work to meet my expenses. Whatever the course it might be, I would make it beneficial.

                                                                                                                                       -Murthy

E.g.: You have read the one act play ‘Dear Departed.’ Think that you were Victoria. Now make a diary entry on the day your parents were taught a lesson by your grandfather.

15th July 1989                                                                                                                            

Thursday

9.20 pm

Dear diary,

               I am so sorry for what have happened today. It’s really cruel to behave like that my parents, aunt and uncle towards my grandfather. They thought that he was dead and started dividing things not bothering about the dead grandfather. But luckily, he was not dead.

               He decided to get marry to Mrs. John Shorrocks the next Monday to teach our parents a lesson. My parents, aunt and uncle were amazed with his decision. They discussed whether to attend the marriage or not. Anyhow, finally they decided not to attend.

               I love my grandfather. I must attend the marriage at Ring-O-Bells. I decided. But how would I go alone without parents. I pray the god to change their minds by Sunday.

                                                                                                                        -Victoria

E.g.: Think that you were the son in the lesson - ‘The Journey.’ Now make a diary entry of yours before the day leaving to work after your marriage.

20thJanuary 2022                                                                                                                                     

Thursday

9.20 pm

Dear diary,

               It was pleasure for me for these six months. I got married and enjoyed with the family members all these days. It’s time I left for work. But lethargy crept in. After some dilly-dallying I decided to go.

               It is hard for me to leave behind my newly-wed wife and the family. But my expenses during my marriage got me into debt. Hence, I did decide to go. Now it is the beginning of the season to work in fields. I could not find any one to carry my luggage to the station.

               May the god help me!

                                                                                                                                       -XXXXXXX

E.g.: You have read the one-act-play, ‘Never-Never Nest’. Aunt Jane found very difficult in the way Jack and Jill are living. She felt very unhappy and helped them by gifting another cheque. Now, make a diary entry of Aunt Jane on the day she visited Jack and Jill’s home..

30th July 2021                                                                                                                            

Thursday

9.00 pm

Dear diary,

               I am so sorry for the life Mr. Jack and Mrs. Jill leading. They are so pompous in their life. The way they meet their needs and comforts is really bothered me. They are earning a little but spending a lot. The couple is crazy about the installment’s life. The installments life they are leading is very dangerous. Even they got their baby by paying installments in hospital is embarrassing. What will happen, if we lead a normal life? 

               How would I change them? Except giving them some money, I have. But it wouldn’t meet their expenses.

               May god bless them!

                                                                                                                        -Jane

E.g.: Imagine that you were the elder son of Bhayyaji. Now make a diary entry on the day started rebuilding the storeyed house.

17th February 2022                                                                                                                                 

Sunday

10.10 pm

Dear diary,

               That rascal, Kondiba Patil, and his companions killed my father. Fist I thought of revenge on them. But my poor father wished to rebuild the storeyed house not that concealed first floor but a regular two-storeyed house.

            Hence, I decided to fulfill my father’s wish first. Then I have to teach them a lesson not to happen the same for any other person in the village. All my brothers are very co-operative and understood my thoughts. We started it today. Soon with the blessings of my late father it would come true without any obstacle.  

            Dad, give us the courage to complete the construction.

                                                                                                                        -XXXXXXX

E.g.: Think that you were Kalam. Make a diary entry of Abdul Kalam on the day Mrs. Iyer rejected to serve him meal in her ritual kitchen.

11th December 1945                                                                                                                               

Tuesday

9.20 pm

Dear diary,

               It was the wonderful day in my life. My beloved teacher Mr. Iyer invited me to their home for dinner. I went hesitantly unaware of my community. When my teacher asked his wife to serve me she rejected since I am a Muslim boy. I was terrified at once. But my teacher confronted me and led me into their ritual kitchen and served me with his hands.

               Somehow, I have finished my dinner. It was really delicious and tasty. Meanwhile she was observing me how I was eating and washing my hands standing behind the kitchen door. At the end my teacher asked me to come again for another dinner.

               I love my teacher. How would I reject his offer? Let the Almighty may give me courage to go again.

                                                                                                                        -Kalam

 

E.g.: Siva Subramaniam Iyer invited Kalam for a meal. At first his wife was horrified, later she realized the ability of accepting everyone equally. Imagine yourself as Kalam and make a diary entry of your feeling after the incident.

27.03.1946 Friday

9.30 pm

Dear Diary,

               I am so pleased today, as she, wife of my loving teacher, invited me and served meal in her ritual kitchen. I think my guru might have changed her to accept everyone equally. When I visited first time she rejected to serve food.

               I was terrified when my teacher asked me to visit again. But today I felt so happy for what happened. I too learned that we have to accept everyone equally.

               Thank God.

-Kalam

 

E.g.: In the lesson Attitude is Altitude; we see Nick Vujicic, born with no arms or legs, joins the main stream school, where he was teased and bullied. Now imagine yourself as Nick’s classmate and make a diary entry of your attitude towards him.

               27.04.2022

               9.30 pm

               Dear Diary,

               I am so scared today. Nick, who is mainly a torso, joined our school today. He has no arms and legs but he has handsome face and beautiful smile.

               I really felt sorry for him but I was unable to help him as many students teased and bullied him. He was so horrified and cried for help.

               Luckily my English teacher found it and pacified him by talking to him and encouraged to continue in the school. Somehow, he punished the silly children as well.

               Thank God.

                                                                                                                                    -James

E.g.: In the lesson, ‘What is my name?’ you have read about Mrs. Murthy. Throughout the lesson she had been restless to know her name. At last she knew her name when she met her friend.

Now imagine you are Mrs. Murthy and write a diary entry of your feelings on knowing your name.


See that the diary includes these points:

When did you get the thought?

What did you do to recall your name?

Why did you feel it’s important to know your name?

What kind of mental agony you have faced?

What are your feelings after recalling your name?

How thankful you are to the friend who helped you to recall your name?


Possible answer:

12th of August 2021                                                                                                                                

Thursday

9.30 pm

I FOUND MY NAME AGAIN!

My dear Diary,

               Today I felt reborn when I recollected my name with the help of my friend Prameela. I am SARADA.

               Indeed, I had been lost my identity after marriage. Two days ago, I felt terrified of forgetting my name in my scrubbing zeal. I felt died without name. I tried to recollect but in vain. Even my husband, children, parents hadn’t remembered my name.

               I was mad for the last two days when I thought of my name. Nobody pacified me except my name. What is a name? Name is “I”, identity. I am very thankful to my friend, Prameela.

               Now I can sleep happily.

                                                                                                                                                       -Sarada

 

Practice Questions:

1.      Victoria, a ten-year-old girl, in the lesson, “The Dear Departed-1”, goes to her grandfather’s room and finds him getting up. She is very much scared because her parents said that he was dead. She runs to her parents and says the same to them. They amazed at this.

Now imagine that you are Victoria. Write a diary entry for the day on which you had seen strange experience.

2.      In the reading part ‘The Journey’ you have observed how the narrator behaved with his father. The narrator thought that he was a well-educated man and had a white-collar job. He would be belittled if he carried the trunk at the same time he had the guilty that it was improper for him to let his father carry the trunk. Now write a diary entry of the narrator how he felt after reaching his work place.

3.      Imagine yourself as the narrator of “The Journey” lesson. You made your father carry the luggage / trunk. Your education made you avoid any physical labour. You felt it was improper to let your aged father to carry the trunk. Now, make an entry in your diary expressing your feelings.

4.      In the lesson ‘The Journey’ you have read that the narrator had a strange and silent journey with his father. He was also analyzing his behavior on the way. He could not speak with his father during his journey. The narrator also realized later that his father had no shoes to wear and his legs have developed cracks. Imagine that after reaching to his working place, the narrator started writing his dairy. Now, write a diary entry of the narrator in this context.

5.      Siva Subramaniam Iyer invited Kalam for a meal. At first his wife was horrified, later she realized the ability of accepting everyone equally. Imagine yourself as Kalam and make a diary entry of your feelings after the incident.

6.      Savitri lost the golden chance of acting as a heroine in the film Samsaaram because she was very nervous on the stage and took many takes. Now write your feelings in your diary as if you were Savitri

7.      In the lesson ‘The Storeyed House-1’ Bayaji expressed his wish to his children. All were happy with his wish and plans regarding the storeyed house. Now, imagine yourself as Bayaji and make a diary entry of your feelings after your children accepted your wish and plans.

8.      You have read in the lesson, ’Jamaican Fragment’ that the narrator one day saw two children in a garden. He was shocked to see that the white boy was commanding the black boy and the black boy was obeying him like a servant. The author felt very sad at the racial difference being shown at such a small age.

Now write a diary entry of the narrator in this context. Include the narrator’ reaction and feelings about the inferiority of the black boy, future of their community, inequality in the society, what he would want to do to improve the situation etc.

9.      Suppose you have been invited by Bayaji for the housewarming ceremony. You have become an eye witness of the tragic incident that has taken place. The new house has been reduced to ashes costing the life of Bayaji. You felt very sorry about what has happened. You can’t digest the bitter truth that the house warming ceremony has been turned into a sudden, sorrowful death (cremation) ceremony. Now, write a diary entry of yours reflecting on the above heart-breaking incident.

10.   You have read the lesson, ‘The Dear Departed’. At the end of the one-act play Abel Merry weather felt disgusted with his daughters’ greediness and behaviour. Now imagine that you were Abel Merry Weather and express your feelings in the form of the diary. You may include …

·        Daughters’ greediness, fake death, feelings burdensome to the daughters, inclination toward Mrs. John Shorrocks.

11.   In the lesson Attitude is Altitude, we saw Nick Vujicic, born with no arms and legs, joins the main stream school, where he was teased and bullied. Now imagine yourself as Nick’s classmate and make a diary entry of your attitude towards him.

12.   On interviewing Wangari Mathai, a great environmentalist, you could learn many issues about which she is working and got inspired by her. How would you make an entry in your diary on this experience? You may include the ideas in your diary – expressions of your feeling on Wangari Mathai’ activities – your decision for future plans – your involvement in any such programmes in the scenario etc.

13.   In the lesson ‘Attitude is Altitude’ Nick Vujicic got his photograph on Surfer magazine after his 3600 feat. Now imagine yourself as Nick and make a diary entry of your feelings on that day.

14.   In the lesson ‘Attitude is Altitude’ we saw Nick was joined in a main stream school, where he was teased and bullied. Now imagine yourself as Nick’s classmate and make a diary entry of your attitude towards him.

15.   In the lesson ‘Attitude is Altitude’ Nick’s parents decided to send him to a main stream school. Now imagine yourself as Nick’s mother and make a diary entry on that day.

16.   You have read about Nick and you are inspired by his story. Now make a diary entry of your feelings and how you are inspired by him.

17.   You knew that Nick Vujicic was inspired by a newspaper article about a disabled man. Now imagine yourself as Nick Vujicic and make a diary entry on the day you read the article.

18.   Think that you were Mr. Narayana Murthy. Now make a diary entry on the day you have passed with high rank in IIT entrance results.

19.   Think that you were Victoria. Now make a diary entry on the day your parents were taught a lesson by your grandfather.

20.   Think that you are the son in the lesson ‘The Journey.’ Now make a diary entry of the son before leaving to work after marriage.

21.   In the lesson ‘The Journey’ the officer returned to work at the end. Think that you are the officer. Now make a diary entry after returned to work from home.

22.   Make a diary entry of Aunt Jane on the day she visited Jack and Jill’s home.

23.   Write a diary entry of the elder son of Bayyaji on the day started rebuilding the storeyed house.

24.   Think that you are Kalam. Make a diary entry of Abdul Kalam on the day Mrs. Iyer rejected to serve him meal in her ritual kitchen.

25.   In the lesson, ‘The Storeyed House’ we saw that on returning from his father’s funeral, Bayaji’s elder son started working on reconstructing the house. He decided to fulfil his father’s dream along with his other siblings. He says “Our father’s soul cannot rest in peace unless we do this.”

Imagine that Bayaji’s elder son is writing his feelings in his dairy about the whole incident and his plans to fulfill his father’s dream.

Now, write what he would have written in his diary.

You may include… His feelings… Father’s dream… His determination for the storeyed house…

26.   In the lesson, ‘Jamaican Fragment’ the author, A.L. Hendricks might have felt guilty for misunderstanding the play of the children. At the same time, he might feel proud for his countrymen living together without racial discrimination.

Suppose the author wished to make an entry of his feelings in his diary. How would he have made it? Now imagine yourself as the author and write the diary entry.

27.   Imagine you visited the house of Jack and Jill. Jack described you how he purchased furniture, radiogram, piano, house etc. He explained you the mode of borrowing money and payments. Write a diary entry of your feelings as you were embarrassed. Oppose the idea of buying everything on installments.

28.   In the lesson, ‘What is my name?’ you have read about Mrs. Murthy. Throughout the lesson she had been restless to know her name. At last she knew her name when she met her friend.

Now imagine you are Mrs. Murthy and write a diary entry of your feelings on knowing your name. See that the diary includes these points:

When did you get the thought? What did you do to recall your name? Why did you feel it’s important to know your name? What kind of mental agony you have faced? What are your feelings after recalling your name? How thankful you are to the friend who helped you to recall your name?

29.   You have read the story ‘The Storeyed House.’ Imagine that you were one of the guests of “Bayaji’s house warming ceremony” and you experienced an unexpected incident happened during the ceremony. Bayaji’s new house caught fire and he died. Now make a diary entry of your feelings about the incident.

30.   Victoria, a ten-year-old girl, in the lesson ‘The Dear Departed’, goes to the grandfather’s room and finds him getting up. She is very much scared because parents say that he is dead. She runs to her parents and tells the same. They amazed at this. Suppose you are Victoria and write a diary entry for the day on which you had faced strange experience.

In the lesson ‘Attitude is Altitude’ we see Nick Vujicic born with no arms or legs, joins the main stream school, where he was teased and bullied. Now imagine yourself as Nick’s classmate and make a diary entry of your attitude towards him. (TS – SSC March 2016)

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